Awesome shading on the muscles and jeans, though he is a bit more hip-tastic than a male should be, anatomically speaking.

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Good work...

I like the colours and the shadows of the muscles.....

Sabin is looking very hot
Nice muscles... I couldn't draw abs if my life depended on it >.<
Awesome job!

Great coloring job. I especially like what you did with the background.

*glances at the 'advanced crtitique encouraged'*

ok, first off, the hips are too wide and short for a male. (One thing to remember is that men have narrower but TALLER hips than females.)
Second, and I know I've pointed this out a billion times before, but the nipples are in the wrong spot. They're not supposed to be that close to the center of the chest, but more towards the edge of the pec (A little more than halfway across).
Another thing I noticed is that all of the fingers are the same length with the exception on the pinky (On the hand closest to us, the other one looks fine).
On the arm that is farthest away from us, there is a problem with how the bicep is flowing into the shoulder, in that it's NOT (The bottom of the bicep will actually flow UNDER the deltoid, not end abruptly. If it did, it'd be kind of hard to lift your arm up.).

I hope this helps. It's a good piece, but these mistakes kind of leap out at you (Like when I draw a woman with no hips!). I hope I wasn't too harsh, but human anatomy is one of the few things I feel I'm very good at.

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That's fine :3 - Thanks for the comments - I was worried about the hips - They were even worse before I made some adjustments, But I don't think they were enough.

After a bit I will probably try to come back and make some more adjustments to better the anatomy errors. But I definately need to put this piece aside for a bit before coming back to it

Wheeee! The Sabin-y-liciousness!!!
*glomp*
I best scan mine, ne???

The texture of the pants is alluring. Mreow.

*Grins* Thanks so much, Emer! ^__^
*grins* I look forward to the scannage! ^_^

Huh? I havn't made any comments on this one yet? lol, oh well, I am now I suppose. Very cool colors and perspetive. Your coloring technique is coming along great, keep it up. Now as far as critique, I believe 'Blanco-Hombre' (lols @ white boy name) summed it up for the most part, although take some time to work on your perspective, I can definetly see the angled perspective you are going for with this one and that makes your work stand out that much more! ^_^ definetly heading in the right direction, so just keep at it ^_^